So, Monday at school in English class I was so happy! When we were told to get into different groups and "Work-shop" our papers, Liz Fulp looked over my paper! And I got so much out of that! So, thank you Liz  =)

Small things like using presents tense, being careful about my word choice..and never start your paper out with a question because it leads the reader in a wrong direction..were some of the things I learned =)

I still think Hamlet did things the wrong way..I mean who would intentionally act mad to seek revenge? It does not make sense..and obviously did not work because the sonnet turned out to be a tragedy.