Use of the word " I "

Im working some more on my paper..and Im feeling really good about it. Im not entirely sure what will become of this "Good" feeling but I am insistent on finding out. I am arguing the third topic that was given out to us on the hand out for this assignment.

A tragic flaw of ones character is described to us as "Hamartia" I think this is a very interesting topic. I believe that Hamlets greatest flaw was his emotions, he destroyed absolutely everything in his path after his meeting with his fathers "Spirit" His mind and his feelings led to bad actions. 

The only issue I am finding myself in is finding sufficient evidence, that pertains to my claims.

I want to make sure that the information is appropriate to what I am trying to get across to my readers.

It will be so much easier to give my opinion since we are aloud to use the word   " I "